KEY TO IELTS WRITING TEST ON 27TH,
OCTOBER, 2012
Advertising discourages people from being different
individuals and makes them want to be or look the same. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
AGREE
- Appear often
- Be motivated to keep up with
Joneses
DISAGREE
- Knowledge- based society
- Basic instincts of human beings
are similar
- Being educated to follow different
beliefs
- The power of products, not
advertising
Advertisements appear ubiquitously.
Some people think that their constant presence somehow clones our thinking
while others believe that each person has a different set of belief and is
hardly affected by these advertisements. I strongly disagree with the idea that
advertisements make us be the same.
Psychologically
speaking, when people see something too often, they are likely to be affected. As a result, they tend to buy products ingrained in their
mind on television. However,
in a knowledge-based society, people are more aware of the quality and real
situation of products they are using. That internet provides them with
different sources of information leads to people’s low possibility of being
victimized by advertisements on television. Besides, with parents encouraging children to
follow their inner desire in their educational method, individuals are not
homogeneous in their dreams. Meanwhile,
advertisements just focus on sales of products, and their core message is not
to turn watchers into those having the same expectation.
Another
reason in support of the former view is that when more people buy the same
products, others are motivated to keep up with the Joneses. Indirectly, they become similar. That might be true if
products gain higher popularity and reputation. Nevertheless, any good product, whether being advertised
or not, is prevalently used by our community. Let’s take Google Mail as
a typical example. Without much marketing strategies or televised messages,
people still keep using this service and trust it for its high reliability and
utility. For this reason, it is the power of the product, not advertising that
spurs people. In addition,
basically, even without the repetitive messages of advertising, we all desire
for a better life with good house, career, services and lover. These
fundamental instincts are inherent in our genes since birth, and advertising
itself is only to emphasize these needs to appeal people. Equally important, the
gap from the experience of watching ads to the idea of being affected in
reality is far enough to blame advertising for homogenizing the society.
- keep up with the Joneses (idiom) : đua đòi
You're not allowed to use idiom in this essay since it requires formal language and therefore reduce your score. Idioms should be used in speaking section, not writing.
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