ĐỀ 15-06-2013
Some people believe families have the most powerful
influence on a child's development, others think other influences such as TV,
friends, music have bigger effects. Discuss.
Agree
- Parental unconditional love
- Family culture
- Parents' experience and knowledge
- Parental gene
Disagree
- Not all parents love teaching
children
- Teachers are more experienced
- Friends and media have significant
external influence
Children's development depends on a
variety of factors. Some people believe that parental teaching plays the most
crucial role while others claim that friends and means of media have equal
significance in children's growth. My essay will shed light on both sides of
the issue.
On
one hand, it is argued that with unconditional love of parents, children feel encouraged
and reach greater success in life.
Mozart's father is a telling example of a person who gave up his own career to
teach children at home and helped his son obtain outstanding musical success. In addition, if children were
born in a family whose parents are great instances, say, professors or famous
actors, they will be motivated to continue tradition and even glorify it.
Scientifically speaking, studies have shown that talent runs in family where
parents have good genes. From appearance, personality to flair, children can
inherit from both their fathers and mothers.
Nevertheless,
it would be equally important to address the role of other factors in children's
comprehensive development. No sooner
are children taught by enthusiastic and professional teachers than they are
imparted a wealth of knowledge and skills to obtain certain success. Besides,
according to statistics, children, as a result of being excessively exposed to
the Internet and television, are more likely to follow suit. Several children,
thanks to admiring their police heroes in movies, decide to fulfill their dreams
as people protecting justice of the world. Friends at school have a say over
children's personality development as well. Facts have shown that if children
often work in groups with peers having high motivation to study and dream big,
they are spurred to succeed and take actions to make that dream come true. Furthermore, those people who
may appear in children's life once or twice still imbue children with sets of
belief. I still recalled the day that I met my father's boss on his
birthday who later inspired me with his historical and amazing life with
determination, creativity and adventures.
In brief, whoever appears in our
life and leaves such significant footprints, we-
little children- will always cherish
for their sharing of knowledge and sentimental
attachment. By dint of these, we all
become useful and successful citizens.
When talking about a child’s development, the big question which people have been debating for a long time is which factor has the greatest influence on this progress. Someone thinks that the answer lies within the families. However, some other does not agree with this opinion. For them, there many other factors which have bigger influence (TV, friends, music and so on). My essay will share my point of view for both opinions.
Trả lờiXóaIt cannot be denied that at the early stage of a child’s development, the one which influenced them the most is the families, especially the parent. They are the role model for the child to follow, the guidance for them. In facts, a small child alaways intimate the action of surround people without knowing the meaning. Therefore, without parents caring, a child can be affected by bad habits, actions.
In the other hands, as the child grows up, there are more and more elements that affect the child personality. Although many people have a lightly look for these elements, in facts, sometimes they are the reason for many major issues. Nowadays, with the mass information all over the medias, a child can easily come up with some bad information, musics, moives which contains violents, sexual elements, etc. This can cause negative influence on the child’s characteristic and behaviors.
In conclusion, there are many factor which affect a child’s development. For me, families, especially parents always have the biggest influecne. They are the one who help the child judge which is wrong, which is right. They also guide the child to build up and follow their own passions, their own dreams.